Fic: HP, (rl/omc), drabble, "can he make you feel as i do?"

[whitmans_kiss]

Title: "can he make you feel as i do?"
Word Count: 100
Author: whitmans_kiss
Rating: R, probably
Warnings: Dark bizarre sex, bloodplay
Characters; Pairings: Remus Lupin, Max Krause (OMC); Remus/Max Krause (OMC)
Disclaimer: The character Remus Lupin is property of JKRowling. The character Max Krause is original and mine. No profit is being made from this.
Author's Notes: Remus POV. Lollyverse. Song "Howl" by Florence + the Machine, discovered some time after this was written. I found it quite fitting and thought to include it; love the religious imagery in the lyrics for Max.



Hot night, boiling over in your veins as hands grope and touch, pull and tear at hair and hips, stripping you of clothing and humanity along with his own, sweat, saliva, moaning as his tongue curves along your clavicle, sinking canines into the flesh of your neck and shoulder, slick as your blood coats his hands and he licks it off, snap of jaw, growl, bloodsticky bellies sliding together, pushing, teeth gripping tightly and head thrown back howling, shoulders sharply rising – hackles, scrabble for purchase as the burning racing damning cursing beast bursts through, hardly a kiss; this is freedom.

Comments

[ceredwensirius.livejournal.com]

Aww, bb, this is lovely, and so visceral. It's almost like their insides come out to play with their outsides. Which is at once sort of gross and kinda cool. There is this feeling of connectedness between the two and have to wonder sometimes if Remus doesn't ask himself if he was happier with Max.

Poor Sirius. Mustn't let him read this.

[whitmans-kiss.livejournal.com]

"I was happier with you, Sirius.

This - it's so different, it's not human, there's no... love inherent in this, it's just - base, animal.

We understand each other, this particular need, this condition we find ourselves in.

With Max, I can be what I am, but with you, I can be what I want to be."

[toujours-nigel.livejournal.com]

This is mating, isn't it, nothing to do with love, simply need.

Very nice.

[whitmans-kiss.livejournal.com]

Though, Max might argue that it is done because of love; however... the act itself is devoid of the emotion, and that leaves a sort of hollowness about it when all is done, mm.


Thank you. ♥